"Secondary school students should not work part-time." What are your views?

To me, secondary school students working part time is alright with me. In fact, I myself would love to go out and work part-time during the school holidays as it is the period when I am most free and that using this time to go out and work would give you some working experiences as well as give you the chance to earn some money to contribute to the household or for you to buy the things you want. In fact, some parents would tell their children to go and work part-time whenever the school holidays came because most children would just spend their time away at home on games and television. Their parents not wanting to see them wasting their precious time away, would ask them to go work part-time for not the money but for the working experience they can gain while they are working. Well, it also depends on what kind of part-time job you are working on. However, working part-time does not mean that students can neglect their studies and put the blame on working just because they did not finish their homework on time or dropped in terms of results. Working part-time may be important but if compared to your studies, it is considered nothing. Reason is that you can't possibly work part-time for the rest of your life, right? If your studies are affected just because you are working part-time, it is not worth it. And it is best not to work part-time when you are having lessons because if you can't cope with the stress from both your work and studies, not only would your studies be affected, your work performance and even your health may be affected.
And so, secondary school students working part-time is acceptable, but they should put their studies in the first place and part-time job second and they should never try to work part-time when the school started having lessons.
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